Generally good work Ollie, with correct formatting. Note that you sometimes randomy capitalise things (eg the actor direction "In a Shy Manner" does not need the capitals). Also "CONTINUED" is only used when there is overlapping dialogue. Please label your posts.Sean
Where is your What Remains comparison??Sean
Generally good work Ollie, with correct formatting. Note that you sometimes randomy capitalise things (eg the actor direction "In a Shy Manner" does not need the capitals). Also "CONTINUED" is only used when there is overlapping dialogue.
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Sean
Where is your What Remains comparison??
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